Friday, February 28, 2014

first draft essay 1 needs conclusion and format work

Graduation rates plummet as public and urban schools have a harder and harder time providing for its students. The outcome of solutions proposed by wealthy and powerful adults on poor minority students causes students to suffer in school.  Society is not blind to the differences that have worsened the gap between wealthy schools and poor schools. From the book Savage Inequalities by Jonathan Kozol, the film Waiting for ‘superman’, to presidents and public figures like Bill Gates and Michell Rhee. People have been trying to solve the problems in our education system for decades. Most Americans would agree you need money to be on top in this country. What they don’t know is that the wealthy are pushing the poor further underneath them to get there. The people trying to make a change are the ones with true compassion and empathy. There the true voices of children who have no choice in how money is spent on their education, and there future. With a lack of funding for low achieving schools , a lack of proper materials, and graduation rates dropping in our country, it’s a wonder where the future will lead America as a whole.
  Public schools in the United States have changed from being segregated with hammy down books in the 1940s, but the apple hasn’t fallen far from the tree when it comes to ’reformed’ public schools in lower classed areas.  The conditions and locations of these schools have not changed much. Possibly, they may even have gotten worse. Countless adults with power and right minds have tried to bring equality between poor lower classed students and wealthy ones, but what it comes down to, is the decisions made by the ones with the most power. From countless presidents, to the teachers union, all have tried to solve problems in the education system by possibly making them worse. In 2001, the No Child Left Behind Act was put into effect. This Act put in place Standardized testing for students to determine their grade level. In order to receive federal funding, public schools must subject there students to these tests and ensure they pass with high scores. This has a negative effect on students, especially in lower class schools lacking good teachers who perform well, materials, and in worse case scenarios, nice buildings. If the test results show the school is not improving, funding is decreased. That is unequal in comparison to wealthier schools that have more than their fair share of wealth to make it safely through school, without repercussions. Supporters of this act feel that a ‘punishment’ as in less funding for low scoring schools will send a message to teachers. That somehow, this message will help them form a better understanding of how important the education system is. However, the schools that are doing poorly will continue to do poorly, if not get worse test scores because of a lack in funding. The children are already at a disadvantage and unprepared for these tests from kindergarten to high school. Whereas wealthier schools that already have the means to prepare their students for these tests, will be further boosted above in society. The public schools at this rate will continuously be pushed down in the nation as a whole. “No head start and they think that they can test our children into mechanical proficiency”. PG 143, Savage Inequalities. Children in poorer, lower class communities are given no boost when it comes to these tests. They lack smaller class sizes, common materials, fully functioning buildings, books and other basic supplies wealthy children automatically have a given right to. Yet most minority children have to struggle for themselves alone.
 Going to school every day and no being able to learn new things or reach your full potential because your school can’t afford its own supplies can’t possibly give any child a brighter outlook on their future. These students aren’t blind or ignorant to what’s going on around them, they even grasp an understanding of how bad it is. The children of East St. Louis attending lower public schools know much more about reality then perhaps parents and teachers would like to believe. “They don’t comment on it but you see it in their eyes. They understand.” (Kozol 88). A teacher who works in a school located next door to a funeral home, talks about the students having a grasp on what suburban schools look like. The school she works in used to be a roller-skating rink. The rooms are overcrowded and flooded with students in comparison to suburban classrooms. The number of teachers to a room is grossly outnumbered. With so many children, the lack of materials is extremely unequal. The local school board is said to have given an equal number of computers to each school. With almost 60 children in this minority classroom vs. 20 in a suburban class, this distribution is clearly unequal. This lack of equality in schools, material shortage, and poor test scores creates persistently low-achieving schools. These students are at a constant disadvantage and it’s not their choice. The government puts out one flyer about other schools and expects parents to read it, they don’t have the money to move out of the area and attend suburban schools, where suburban parents don’t even want them there with their children.
 Becoming a higher achieving school is virtually impossible with a lack of proper funding. Its difficult for students to prepare for standardized testing with paper, pens, lab equipment, adequate books, and computers being scarce and rare to say the least. A teacher working in an Oakland CA community college has said in an interview for an online article about the lack of school materials, that she has started spending her own money to provide her students with simple resources like paper and pens. Its almost a cycle. Children in schools that lack books because of funding cannot properly study for the standardized tests. Pushing out low test scores as a whole, the schools funding is lowered even further. No materials, no learning, no hope for the future. Having equal funding in schools as an attempt to close the education gap between poorer minority schools and wealthier ones, does not solve an unequal problem. Besides the fact that low funding school would possibly need over two thirds the amount wealthy schools get to even catch up. The adults who created standardized testing and put the No Child Left Behind Act in place have never enrolled themselves or their own children into a low achieving minority public school, in a poor neighborhood.
 It was my personal understanding of a select chapter in the book Savage Inequalities, that most students attending school in the East St. Louis area, as early as middle school to the beginning of high school, have given up and accepted the future the governor has practically handpicked for them. “There is no natural way (that) East St. Louis can bring itself out of this situation” Governor Thompson (Kozol 24). He stated that he believes the money going into East St. Louis isn’t being spent on what it needs to be spent on. These students, as well as all students on earth, deserve the right to equal opportunity in education. Damage, however, has already been done to high schools in East St. Louis. One teacher notes that in 23 years he has seen two students graduate despite the schools circumstances. The rest have either failed, become pregnant or dropped out way before senior year . It is not the bad neighborhoods that these students are living in, that create a distressing environment for learning to become impossible, if anything the high rate of high school dropouts create bad neighborhoods. With a larger minority population over the wealthy, the look on our future grown citizens in the workforce is very bleak. These dropout rates will never create jobs and solve Americas problems in the educations system.
 According to the documentary, Waiting for ‘Superman’, a child who doesn’t graduate high school will earn less and most likely end up in prison. A lack of school funding isn’t the only reason a students might not graduate high school. Tenure is a law that assures even the worst performing teachers a ‘job for life’. It was created by the teachers union for teachers who were losing there job to relatives of school boards, and teachers who took to political beliefs parents didn’t want in the classroom. “This is the future of this nation”, Jeff Bliss transcript. Jeff bliss has the right idea about the way a good teacher needs to be. “What you need to do…you gotta make ‘em excited…you gotta touch his freaking heart”. This situation, although isolated and recorded by a student, is not by any means uncommon in public schools. The students are bored, sitting in class, and only reading pages upon pages of text, practically teaching themselves. Once again these may even be government mandated packets given to teachers so that students may complete them. Even if that is so, it is the teachers duty to ensure these students are learning and understanding in the classroom. Students in lower achieving schools have no choice but to attend classes being taught by bad teachers. The teachers union prohibits the firing of bad teachers who have Tenure. These are teachers who are low performing, are not engaging or even caring for there students. “1 out of 57 doctors loses his or her license to only 1 out of 1000 teachers is fired for performance…” , Waiting for ‘superman’. These teachers with tenure very rarely lose there teaching credentials, and cannot be fired. What so what the public schools have come up with is called the ‘dance of the lemons’. Bad teachers are bounced and traded from school to school in the hopes that the teacher they end up with is less of a failure then the last. Firing a teacher is just about as difficult as getting a divorce, only more impossible. Tenure is less about creating good students and keeping jobs for good teachers, as it is about the adults and their money.
 The adults with the most power, which are in charge of funding public schools, choose which are successful and which are not. The only way students are given a second chance at their education, is by taking the same chance as winning the lottery, literally. Students are entered into a lottery by name and a number. If there number is chosen by random, the student is allowed a space in a nicer school, a charter school, with better teachers, nicer buildings, and school supplies. All these children have dreams, and hopes for a better future. They want to become doctors, nurses and even teachers themselves. They will have no chance in these fields unless they are given a better education.
 Some people argue that money isn’t the problem with these schools and the education system, that money is not the solution. If that was true, why are the most powerful also the wealthiest? Why are these wealthy white adults not distributing money equally to schools that need it the most? The rich get richer and the poor get poorer. That’s the way the system works for the wealthy. That’s the way the rich and powerful want it to be, a lesser education for the ones who are lesser then them.

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